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Sci-fi ode to poemranker nicknames (Free verse) by zodiac

In the future We all get new faces sutured Onto our old faces; And you can change them on a weekly basis (that is, if you can afford it.) And so (you can imagine) we've all kinds of sordid Soirees at matinees, The races, And other public places - At rendezvous over imported Brows, lips, cheeks (everyone speaks Highly now of the romanesque, but it was traces Of the Greek Just last week.) - Man! It's the life! A drunk girl shimmies up to you at the Dôme, Whispers: last week when you took me home - Remember? You were Keats And I was Shelley, and places Her hand on your groin (though now you're Blake And she's some blonde Frau Goering, Or something such; a little boring, And identityless and plasticky-fake After too much dancing with the knife - ) - Jesus! It's the life! It's wearing anonymity like tangled sheets, Like week-old briefs (that is, we all wear 'em - But it's not something you advertise;) It's cigarette-tasting cold mornings, the harem Smell of disinterest, a stranger snoring And yourself a stranger (and yes, probably boring;) It's endless meaningless greetings and goodbyes; And the peculiar surprise Sometimes of waking Up and finding you've been making Love with your own wife.

zodiac 23-Jan-04/12:10 PM
There was an earlier and longer version with an extended conversation between Blake and a Baron von Goering (seriously) that dark angel would have gotten and nobody else, including myself. I'm glad it's dead. And yes, it does suck to endlessly comment on your own posts.




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