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One Sided Love (Haiku) by Caducus

Tell her you love her, And feel the start of the end, Her kiss feels lighter.

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 24-Sep-03/2:59 PM
I would say this poem is somewhat elliptical, if you don't mind my saying so. -4-




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