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Thanks For The Brain Damage (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Surounded. No retreat. Confused. Lost. Trapped. Tired. Give up. You win. No more. Mercy. Please. Love. Hate. Numb. Angry. Ignorant. Dumbfounded. Defeated. Cornered. Sold. Forgotten. Buried. Ashamed. Fucked. Falling. Burning. Bleeding. Torn. Dead. Empty.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 22-Mar-03/1:12 PM
I'll fix it but I liked angery better cause it went better title.




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