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the room's a'spinnin' (Haiku) by nentwined

the room's a'spinnin' mah vision's twinnin', thinnin' should have fuckin' slept

nentwined 30-Sep-02/12:25 PM
Hmm. just tossed the poem above the comment on the "reply to comment" page. That should make life a little easier. :) hmm.

more impact... "damn shit fuckin' cunt"? doesn't quite work. probably too delirious to think much about it at the moment. :)

"dawn has passed me by"

"sleep's for the, huh?"

"insert impact here"

"a bloody chainsaw"

"five sa-lyll-a-bles"




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