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Mountain Fever (Free verse) by Celticai

The wind sends its breath Across my body – my mind – my soul Standing amidst these mountains of time I’m sensitized Energized… Joyous to be alive, wild, and free. My heartbeat accelerates Skin flushes with rosy tones of ardour I tremble and shiver in responsive anticipation. To be at one with the earth spirit that swirls around me Surrounded yet alone Selfish but compliant Finding the summit wondrously. I am on top of the world – a perfect moment in time.

Celticai 15-Oct-08/10:32 PM
No one has actually commented on the intent of the poem. I've received many talking about the 'nature' of this poem - that it is about landscapes and one-ness with the earth. It was actually about seeking an orgasmic experience.. go figure.




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