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SWF seeks SWM (Free verse) by Bethy

Wallflower, barstool, pink blouse, "(such a fool)" Salted nuts, alluring grin, whose heart, shall I win? Push-up bra, conversation, a drink on me, intuition. Breath mints, a condom too, sit closer, it might be you. Local band, favorite song, more nuts, this is wrong. Bartender, last call, feeling lonely, feeling small. Exit sign, above my head, cab drive, alone in bed. (written a bit ago, made some changes, thanks to you folks)

half.italian 7-Sep-08/12:33 AM
Great poem! I love the rhythm. I remember the poem about your legs. One of my favorites! This captures the same feeling.




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