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There can be only one (Villanelle) by Shardik

"There can be only one." I'm sorry you'll go Said the father to son Raising you sure was fun Fixing your clothes so "There can be only one." "You'll forget when I'm done How my loving wind flowed." Said the father to son The light of my sun It's a shame you must know "There can be only one." "My dead weight a ton Second string scarecrow" Said the father to son Though, I left you with none in a boat you can't row "There can be only one" Said the father to son.

nentwined 2-Jul-08/2:36 AM
definitely has something (situational plot). If you could inject a little more context and a little less highlander...




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