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standing outside the door (Free verse) by nentwined

My urine hose waits coiled and ready; change rattles in my pocket and only after striking will the hiss come out. Don't bug me.

Jill Stockinger 15-Jan-07/7:51 PM
The "don't bug me" I take it refers to the other person waiting to get into the bathroom, named in the title-




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