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Fifteen (Free verse) by Dovina

A recent downy mustache pushes forth upon his lip. A creep of jungle espaliers down his thigh, as wet-soil scent wafts musty from his coves— my changing playmate in the pomegranate tree. Something moves beneath me in the limb on which we sit late of afternoon of later summer. Red pomegranate berries change to purple juice, and distant mountain folds to wine-stained glow. It swings me limb to limb, throws my feet on rocky ground. I run as from an earthquake, afraid of what I’ll lose.

INTRANSIT 20-Nov-06/4:36 PM
(new) downy mustache

something about the distant mountain folds- makes no sense to me. I'm assuming the pomegranate berries are your period/ovulation.

Why do you run and what exactly are you running from might flesh (no pun intended) this out .




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