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Your Eyes (Free verse) by Dovina

A fence, wandering across the land, along some ancient line, encloses and discloses, relates in its purpose, to other things, not itself— what it keeps and what it keeps out, the boundaries it proclaims, the openings it allows. Having walked the public side, and peeked in, I’m searching for the gate.

Dovina 24-Oct-06/11:03 AM
Actually, “gate” may not be what I’m searching for. It’s more subtle than that; maybe just a fencing nail left loose at a cedar post, allowing a strand of barbed wire to be lowered enough to gain entrance. Thanks for the comment.




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