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Timing (Free verse) by Dovina

In another age, I would have married young, To a pre-selected man from my village, had too many children, broken my back with my hands, died early, rested beneath the second of three crosses behind his house, while our hated king lived on a far away hill. I would have believed in servitude and done what the priest said, until my husband came home drunk, layed me and fell asleep. Then I would have hung a red lantern for seafare to Paris.

Ranger 15-Oct-06/4:03 PM
The world as we know it will change either way. If we do nothing then eventually nature will cut us back down again. It's already happening in China, in the AIDS-ridden countryside. But if we go for an all-out change of attitude on a large scale, there is no way that the world can stay the same either. For one thing, the idea of lasting marriage will continue on the slippery downward slope that it's already on.




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