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Timing (Free verse) by Dovina

In another age, I would have married young, To a pre-selected man from my village, had too many children, broken my back with my hands, died early, rested beneath the second of three crosses behind his house, while our hated king lived on a far away hill. I would have believed in servitude and done what the priest said, until my husband came home drunk, layed me and fell asleep. Then I would have hung a red lantern for seafare to Paris.

Ranger 15-Oct-06/6:54 AM
Yes, but it's populated mostly by non-whites with a religion which nobody understands, odd-shaped gods, brightly-coloured clothes, stuff being sold in the street, and lepers. So of course it's going to be seen as full of quaintly backward poor people too helpless to do anything for theirselves by those of us fortunate enough to live in this respectably black-suited world of legalities and pristine healthcare. I mean, it's not as though we have to worry about beggars here, is it?




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