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The Dovina Memorial Bike Lane (Free verse) by Dovina

----Buried in this ground---- ashes of the founder remains of the defier bequeathed to the City for burial here by one who covertly abused her job Drafter Dovina the Drafter to subvert City officials disobey her boss and bring this bike lane before a public meeting whereupon its need was realized and the city acquiesced Dedicated April 1, 20xx by the repentant Carpinteria City Council

nypoet22 24-Sep-06/6:23 PM
and maybe more present tense instead of past tense. try it.




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