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Racism 3 (Free verse) by Dovina

It hit like an asteroid, penetrating the sphere, and two became one flesh. Her destiny grew as stated, her course and color set. They knew she could never know the others because their knowledge came from better stock, or their outcomes self adjusted, so they said that what she thought was false.

zodiac 15-Jan-06/4:10 PM
They did, didn't they? Add a stanza: How is what she thought TRUE?




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