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I saw Your Face Last Night (Free verse) by Dovina

each line, each feature in the ceiling as I lay in bed your eyes urgently staring lips parted as if to receive sleep distant your illusion hovered reaching to me I lay still, staring not wishing to lose you in half-sleep I tasted you in mind waited for you to invade dreams An empty place beside me the sheets there cold I traced your arms and back

wilco 13-Dec-05/1:55 PM
To be honest, I didn't even realize this was you until I went back and looked to see who the writer was. I think you're selling yourself short here. I really thought this was done by one of our kiddieposters (albeit a more advanced one.)




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