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A Modern Woman (Free verse) by Dovina

Free to regard a situation ponder with reason select an attitude use it submit passively push forcefully vegetate exasperate or take it in a sporting way with humor as men want all choices lie before a modern woman We can rest think intensively ponder scientifically or philosophically or take advantage for training or spiritual retreat I’d like to meet a modern woman

Dovina 29-Nov-05/9:55 AM
No metaphors here that I can see, just inconsistent disses. When two things are placed together in a sentence, and the two seem unrelated, I have to wonder why the writer put them together.




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