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A Modern Woman (Free verse) by Dovina

Free to regard a situation ponder with reason select an attitude use it submit passively push forcefully vegetate exasperate or take it in a sporting way with humor as men want all choices lie before a modern woman We can rest think intensively ponder scientifically or philosophically or take advantage for training or spiritual retreat I’d like to meet a modern woman

zodiac 29-Nov-05/2:20 AM
This sucks. You can't hold a metaphor straight for an entire line, but I'm getting called on inconsistent disses?




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