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A Modern Woman (Free verse) by Dovina

Free to regard a situation ponder with reason select an attitude use it submit passively push forcefully vegetate exasperate or take it in a sporting way with humor as men want all choices lie before a modern woman We can rest think intensively ponder scientifically or philosophically or take advantage for training or spiritual retreat I’d like to meet a modern woman

ALChemy 24-Nov-05/6:01 AM
How is that modern. My grandmother could do all those things and probably did and her lifestyle was never more modern than what you might see on The Waltons. Unfortunately you can't meet her because she died in the late 80s. Maybe change modern to free and you might have more of a statement.

The first stanza has nice rhythm.




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