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Tiny pearl earrings, delicate and black, concealed in flowing hair. Dainty ankle bracelet, almost hidden in lacy folds of broomstick skirt. Moving curls, tickling shoulders, induce seductive smile. I slip a shoe, slide a foot on side-calf soft, slither a hand to sense neat shape of knee. My little secrets. Sitting straight and proud, wearing nipples as jewelry, sensual, alone, with maybe a watching eye.

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3-Nov-05/3:55 AM

re: "Your pattern is predictable". The original subject is resolved; our conclusion is you have no leg to stand on. Except in the course of resolving that, you've made like 10 other egregious social and grammatical blunders. Which are as follows:

1) People who are Republican are less likely than non-Republicans to own passports. Do you agree with that? Passport ownership isn't a definition of Republicanism, but it is related. Don't think I'm changing the subject. This is called an analogy.

2) No, you wouldn't.

3) To that I'd add, what is any discussion of race good for?

4) You didn't say the black race and white race are widely different. You said "the most different race from his [-=Dark_Angel=-'s]" and "about as different as it gets". Surely even you can make that distinction.

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