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Lines (Other) by OneFingerAnswer

If the lines were smooth, But the words weren`t true, Would it mean more than My tongue tripping over you?

god'swife 4-Sep-02/11:26 PM
Took me a couple of readings to understand. If you make the line break at more, the pause would help comunicate the thought.




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