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Seekers (Free verse) by Dovina

A tree with crocked branches brushes gently on stucco, the rough siding of a church, suggesting to the church how differently men and nature seek. While nature trembles over herself or stretches awkwardly, asymmetrically— yearning, adjusting, our houses stand measured and precise, our concepts bold and plum our utterances contained within walls.

Caducus 15-Sep-05/8:57 AM
you dont need asymettrically its too effucsive with it but i like the comparisons of natures shape to our own.




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