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Mid Years (Free verse) by Dovina

After the travails of menopause and before the fogginess of senile dementia comes a lingering sourness of melancholy that mixes with sweet hours of friendship to produce the finest moments of life For men, maybe it comes after the keen edge of erectile imperative and before virility's illusion turns into a joke Then it's about relationship as we said it was all along but never believed

Dovina 17-May-05/11:15 AM
If it is true that you, “provide emotional support when [your] wife needs it and have it provided when [you] need it,” then bravo! And if it is true: “My relationship/marriage is founded on this idea of perfect mutuality and distribution of work,” then bravo again. But I am hearing so much cerebral definition and so little feeling that I wonder. Anyway if you are “living the dream” then you are right, I should lay off.




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