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The Symbol (Free verse) by Dovina

Hung about her neck A symbol of cruelty blood and death swings above her heart. She’s a gang member’s babe indecent, vicious and punk not to be trusted or hired possibly terrorist probably AIDS else she’d trade that cross for some less gruesome symbol of death— a skull perhaps

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 31-Mar-05/12:28 PM
You're both wrong.

The cross Jesus died on:
* Is a gruesome instrument of execution

Crucifixion:
* Is a gruesome method of execution

Symbolic crosses:
* Are symbols of a gruesome instrument of execution
* Are symbols of a gruesome method of execution
* Are good luck charms

Dovina:
* Is a buffoon

zodiac:
* Fills his bloomers daily




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