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Bridesmaids in the Rain (Triolet) by wilco

Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes. Drinking wine and stale champagne and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain. I remember watching you board the train against a September sunrise. Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes.

Plaidypus 14-Feb-05/9:02 PM
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....




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