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One True Instant (Free verse) by Dovina

Directly in front of me the one I call husband Our eyes meet for one true and necessary instant Then turning away as a stranger does back to his life’s recesses Those places I have not been and will never be invited The taut lean torso a silhouette in my doorway The sure hope of his shoulders standing inert

Dovina 10-Oct-04/10:21 AM
A very long piece of bull. I am flattered you spent so muh time on this silliness.




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