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Bridesmaids in the Rain (Triolet) by wilco

Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes. Drinking wine and stale champagne and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain. I remember watching you board the train against a September sunrise. Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes.

Dovina 3-Oct-04/10:57 AM
It's the cahmpagne. Love and marriage - they seldom go together. Dream on and enjoy the slow dance at a wedding that isn't yours. Good thoughts




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