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Bridesmaids in the Rain (Triolet) by wilco

Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes. Drinking wine and stale champagne and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain. I remember watching you board the train against a September sunrise. Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes.

That One 29-Sep-04/10:19 PM
leaves little room for imagination

"last of the first glass" good line




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