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Distance (Free verse) by wilco

The world is only a picture of ordinary people searching for the extraordinary. Love is only a fixture in romance novels and poems with trains. Distance is only a measure of how badly you want to see her.

Dovina 8-Jul-04/10:08 AM
Verse 1 is a summation of the comments on Recyclet Stardust.

Verse 2 is anti-love

Verse 3 is is a measure of love, and hard to associate with verse 2

Maybe love is the cliche, and this is the answer.

Not bad.




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