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Paradelle of Progress (Other) by Dovina

I remember the thin form of nervous strain I remember the thin form of nervous strain And emotional deposit on blank page And emotional deposit on blank page I deposit and remember the form of thin strain Emotional blank on nervous page

Dovina 6-Jul-04/11:00 AM
A 10 is quite acceptable, considering that I did not yield to the temptation of breaking out, even in the slightest, from the constraint of paradelle, and have at least attempted to provide your burning ears with the utmost in poetic accomplishment.




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