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Paradelle of Progress (Other) by Dovina

I remember the thin form of nervous strain I remember the thin form of nervous strain And emotional deposit on blank page And emotional deposit on blank page I deposit and remember the form of thin strain Emotional blank on nervous page

Dan garcia-Black 6-Jul-04/10:57 AM
When not sure if a -10- is too much, be a coward and give a 9+.




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