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Sustained (Free verse) by Dovina

With capacity to recognize Shortcomings in himself, The shortfall between his life And his art, He drives toward abasement With inflexible morality, Like a river to the sea, Carrying garbage in its wash. Black eddies shock his soul, Tragedies pinch a narrow life, Something soured, embittered, Like late September smog. He groans and shudders and pushes on. The more he submits to the drag Of moral gravitation, Striving to achieve distance, while cleaving to his friends, The more a reactive thrust rises, Sustaining as he seeks to descend. He drives earthward, pulled skyward, A marvel of levitation. Reactive waves, Rebounding, falling, Rebounding.

zodiac 26-Jun-04/12:14 PM
Of course not.

But I do find the thought of forcibly removing myself from poemranker (in 10 days!) tremendously arousing. Just check out this 'off-the-cuff' rhyme:

I'm going to a town
Where everything's brown
And they cut off your hands if you're gay,

But the thought that I might
Get away from this site
Has caused me to uncontrollably spray
All over my 'greenscreen' display.

PS-You might try writing 'wholly' instead of 'wholely', as the first has the advantage of being correct, while yours does not.




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