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Heaven Out Here (Free verse) by wilco

Floating around this rivers' bend, I believe I've found the meaning of life; To enjoy what God has put on Earth, and never waste a second chance. The sun is beating on my aching back, and flesh, slowly turning pink. A cooler full of ice-cold beer, and blue skies as far as the eye can see. The thunderstorm slowly moving in to remind me that I'm mortal, when I'm feeling as if I'll live forever; Floating around this rivers' bend.

sliver 2-Jun-04/3:08 PM
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently.
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