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and the world evolves (Free verse) by peaceseeker

let's not, and then say we did clink here's to your next lover oblivious to your intentions basking in the glow of your light reflecting back what you request tolerating each slippery step down into the ground of your din with your inability to air your pain in reality may you always be happy with a light behind your smile. may you forever follow the passion from your heart. may you lift yourself from the downward spiral your deepest pain brings you to. may you be grateful you were so fortunate to live and love inside my universe

peaceseeker 17-May-04/10:28 AM
create your own commas - not my style.

Ani D.- "We'll see what you are made of by what you make of me."




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